tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post3740873748226764447..comments2024-03-27T09:58:35.443-07:00Comments on Reading and Writing: Weekend Writing Warriors Sunday SnippetUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-75924238590982870252018-05-11T10:42:17.692-07:002018-05-11T10:42:17.692-07:00Oh, that made me shiver.Oh, that made me shiver.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-71540365485235258102018-05-11T05:02:00.175-07:002018-05-11T05:02:00.175-07:00I like the premise of this story.Your approach to ...I like the premise of this story.Your approach to the DUAL timelines is perfect!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-54035036663732495632018-05-10T14:12:10.794-07:002018-05-10T14:12:10.794-07:00The first sounds an interesting man, whilst the co...The first sounds an interesting man, whilst the contemporary has devastation potential- in a good way. ;)Carolbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05578076528292643928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-74812392942383694642018-05-09T17:34:09.373-07:002018-05-09T17:34:09.373-07:00This time she was rewarded by a devastating lopsid...<i>This time she was rewarded by a devastating lopsided smile.<br /></i><br /><br />Oh, sigh. How we love that kind of mans ...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-70956126129710927202018-05-07T11:10:31.626-07:002018-05-07T11:10:31.626-07:00Thank you, Veronica!
Thanks, Karen!
Thank you, A...Thank you, Veronica!<br /><br />Thanks, Karen!<br /><br />Thank you, Amy - have tried to connect the alternate chapters throughout!<br /><br />That's good, Ingrid - thank you!<br /><br />Thanks, Diane!Rosemary Gemmellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09311840205603508422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-2281688269931421392018-05-07T10:10:51.878-07:002018-05-07T10:10:51.878-07:00Love a man who smiles. Good snippet.Love a man who smiles. Good snippet.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-34057969154853915862018-05-07T01:49:03.329-07:002018-05-07T01:49:03.329-07:00I can't help but read this in a Scottish accen...I can't help but read this in a Scottish accent. I look forward to future snippets!Ingrid Senger-Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12956134093040963581noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-27112189454865126352018-05-06T20:32:29.315-07:002018-05-06T20:32:29.315-07:00Interesting connection of timelines! Interesting connection of timelines! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-16817410071734314112018-05-06T16:12:00.321-07:002018-05-06T16:12:00.321-07:00Loved a glimpse at both time periods and their fir...Loved a glimpse at both time periods and their first meetings. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-80911470370783570292018-05-06T12:06:15.831-07:002018-05-06T12:06:15.831-07:00Interesting to contrast the two snippets! A novel ...Interesting to contrast the two snippets! A novel idea...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-20447939328831626902018-05-06T11:43:20.806-07:002018-05-06T11:43:20.806-07:00Thank you for that, Jessica!
I'm glad you tho...Thank you for that, Jessica!<br /><br />I'm glad you thought so, Aurora!<br /><br />Many thanks, Lyn!<br /><br />Thanks, Alexis!<br /><br />Thank you, Ed - it's a little bit different from the one story, isn't it? All the best with yours!<br /><br />Thanks, Christina - must confess I liked them both myself!Rosemary Gemmellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09311840205603508422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-72707717960864720212018-05-06T11:15:39.221-07:002018-05-06T11:15:39.221-07:00I love these two timelines juxtaposed like this. B...I love these two timelines juxtaposed like this. Both men sound lovely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00200483339139860998noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-50805374014744185952018-05-06T10:07:35.275-07:002018-05-06T10:07:35.275-07:00I like how you use the smile to tie the two timeli...I like how you use the smile to tie the two timelines together. The WIP I'm almost done with has dual timelines which eventually merge, and as I've never used this format I'm interested in how other authors handle it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-40225812425728624072018-05-06T08:54:39.035-07:002018-05-06T08:54:39.035-07:00Ah, it's always the smile that gets you. Enjoy...Ah, it's always the smile that gets you. Enjoyed the side-by-side view of each meeting.Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-20557508264901944072018-05-06T06:19:01.729-07:002018-05-06T06:19:01.729-07:00He sounds wonderful - I love the comparison betwee...He sounds wonderful - I love the comparison between the two meetings. Lovely snippet!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-68156600815692154222018-05-06T05:07:35.884-07:002018-05-06T05:07:35.884-07:00Clearly an attractive man. Clearly an attractive man. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5278356786329973174.post-35975030717768160162018-05-06T04:09:23.816-07:002018-05-06T04:09:23.816-07:00Both are very sweet and telling first meetings. :)...Both are very sweet and telling first meetings. :)Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.com